• When Passion Fuels Writing, it Shows

    Logo for NFPW at Large Award Winner 2026 featuring a feather and elegant typography.

    March turned out to be a lucky month for me, and I found a pot of gold at the end of a rainbow. The National Federation of Press Women (NFPW) informed me I’d won three awards in their 2026 At-Large Professional Contest in three different categories. I wasn’t sure why this affected me so much, so I worked through it in writing and hope some of the thoughts might help other writers.

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    Graphic certificate for 1st place in the National Federation of Press Women At-Large Professional Contest 2026, featuring a gold seal and the title 'Connecting the Dots' with a judge's comment highlighting its excellence.

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    Holy cow—nice words—thank you!

    Why it Matters

    One of my writing mentors once said, “When passion fuels writing, it shows.”

    I was fiercely passionate about the “Connecting the Dots” story. I wrote about the military assignment where I believed I made the most significant impacts of my career. I appreciate being able to share this honor with my former Joint Intelligence Task Force – Combating Terrorism (JITF-CT) teammates. The story appeared in the Military Writers Society of America’s Reflections: Service to our Country anthology.

    Lessons Learned

    • If you care, it shows
    • Write from your heart
    • Gather good quotes from trusted sources

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    Graphic announcing that the Military Writers Society of America’s Dispatches magazine won a first place award for editing from the National Federation of Press Women for Summer 2025. Features a cover image of Dispatches and the NFPW award logo.

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    I dedicated this issue of Dispatches magazine to Vietnam veterans, their families, and those who support them at the fiftieth year commemoration of the war. The judge’s comments helped me think I’m on the right track.

    Why it Matters

    I took over editing this magazine as a volunteer effort after the three previous editors quit. I had no “pass down” (as we called it in the Navy) and lived through a big learning curve. I made changes I thought would help and have had the pleasure of helping veterans and military families tell their stories—many published for the first time.

    Lessons Learned

    • If taking on  a newsletter or magazine, have an organizational plan. Here is a previous blog post on that subject: https://valerieormond.com/2025/07/21/five-magazine-management-tips/
    • Although a volunteer effort, my heart sings when members appreciate having their stories or poems published
    • Rely on wonderful magazine and book designers like the most-patient Andrea Reider of Reider Books and who has made my job easier and the outcome award-winning

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    A digital award certificate from the National Federation of Press Women (NFPW) for the At-Large Winner 2026, featuring an honorable mention. The document includes a section titled 'The Writing Craft' with an article excerpt titled 'Song Lyrics - Risky Business' by Valerie Ormond. It showcases judge comments praising the writing style.

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    I entered the “Song Lyrics – Risky Business” article into the competition at the last minute for some reason. My first version was—well, boring. I decided to add a little humor, which made it more fun and a better read.

    Why it Matters

    I wrote this short article after being part of writers groups and seeing and hearing people using song lyrics in their stories and books, unaware of the copyright issues involved.

    Lessons Learned

    • Even if it hadn’t won an award, it was information I thought fellow writers should be aware of
    • If a story isn’t working, look for another way to approach it that may work
    • Have fun with writing and presenting stories

    I hope something here may be useful for other writers and editors and thank the awards judges for their valuable time and feedback.

  • Words Matter Week

    A hand placing a wooden block on a stack of wooden blocks, symbolizing growth and progress. Text overlay promotes 'Words Matter Week' from March 1-7, 2026, with a quote by Benjamin Franklin about the importance of continual growth.

    Did you know there is a Words Matter Week?

    From the  National Association of Independent Writers and Editors (NAIWE):

    “Words Matter Week, which is in its 18th year, is a national holiday that is celebrated annually the first full week in March by the National Association of Independent Writers and Editors (NAIWE) and numerous other word lovers.

    Words are the basis for communication, no matter the language spoken. Babies make sounds, which eventually are formed into words. Here at NAIWE, we know the importance of words, and we want to celebrate it with YOU!

    We may only celebrate it for a week, but we believe in the importance of words all year long!”

    NAIWE hosts daily writing challenges for members, and more information is available at www.WordsMatterWeek.com.

    Words do NOT matter if we never put them to paper or the keyboard. So, my challenge to yuself for Words Matter Week is to write at least 30 minutes per day. We’ll see what kind of “matter” shows up at the end of the week.

    I hope you will challenge yourself!

  • Looking Back Through Books: Bold Characters and Bigger Goals

    A graphic featuring book covers of 'Fall of Giants' by Ken Follett, 'Sisters of Night and Fog' by Erika Robuck, 'Degrees of Intelligence' by Miranda Armstadt, and 'Undaunted Courage' by Stephen E. Ambrose, with a central caption 'Conviction-Driven Stories'.

    The new year is a good time to reflect on the last, and I prefer to look at the positive. I read and listened to more books than ever, which means I’m achieving one of my goals! Since my current work in progress is a historical fiction novel, I consider reading part of my homework.

    I curated ten of my recent favorites across a variety of genres but with similarities: strong characters fighting to support their countries and their beliefs.

    Historical Fiction

    Fall of Giants (The Century Trilogy #1) by Ken Follett

    Reading this led to books #2 and #3 in this series…a fascinating education told in riveting tales

    Sisters of Night and Fog by Erika Robuck

    Strong women fighting evil and seeking survival against all odds

    The Rose Code by Kate Quinn

    Three brilliant women from wildly different backgrounds solving the problems others couldn’t

    Degrees of Intelligence: A Geopolitical Thriller of WWII and the Cold War—Inspired by a True Story by Miranda Armstadt

    Politics, spies, and a behind-the-scenes look at the early days of the CIA

    The Sand Pounder: Love and Drama on Horseback in WWII by M.J. Evans

    What’s not to love about a young woman challenging the rules to serve her country?

    (Young adult historical fiction)

    History

    Undaunted Courage: Meriwether Lewis, Thomas Jefferson, and the Opening of the American West by Stephen E. Ambrose

    An eye-opening story of adventure, history and courage every American should read (or listen to)

    Operation Underworld: How the Mafia and U.S. Government Teamed Up to Win World War II by Matthew Black

    A true story that seems unbelievable—Naval Intelligence and the Mafia joining forces to help win WWII

    Mystery

    Welcome Home to Murder by Rosalie Spielman

    Female veteran returning home to find her family in danger in this cozy mystery

    Fatal Image: An Avery Sloane Mystery by Rhonda Lane

    An intriguing mystery including horses, veterans, and a slice of humor

    Fiction

    Playing Army by Nancy Stroer

    Will she race to the finish line or crash along the way?

    I hope you’ve enjoyed the list, and please feel free to add your own favorites in the comments.

  • Lessons from a Humble Warrior

    A sepia-toned portrait of a young man in a military uniform, wearing a cap with insignia, looking directly at the camera.
                                                                                                                                       George Ormond, 1917, a proud member of “New York’s Division”

    George Ormond’s pale blue eyes watered until the day he died. But he never complained about the Great War. Word was that mustard gas got him, but in those days, people didn’t talk much about injuries, follow-on treatment, or post-traumatic stress. My grandfather died when I was 21, about the same age he was when returning from the war. I wish I’d had adult conversations with him about his experiences, but it’s obviously too late. He likely didn’t realize how interested people might be in a blue-collar kid from Brooklyn’s renditions of his encounters on the front lines.

    One of my earliest memories of my grandfather taught me a valuable lesson. I was five-years-old, in my front yard, and he watched me kill a bug.

    “Why did you do that?” he asked.

    “Because it was going to bite me,” I answered.

    “But it wasn’t bothering you.”

    And I realized he was right. I felt so ashamed, but I learned from his short training session. This war hardened man taught me in a few sentences to be sensitive to each life.

    Private Ormond spent his last teenage years in the U.S. Army’s 27th Division – New York’s Division. From 1917 through 1919, he trained in the United States, deployed to the Western Front, and returned to his city’s heroic homecoming for the troops. As a child, I understood my grandfather had been in World War I. But as a child, I didn’t realize the old man in front of me wasn’t much older than I was he he experienced the stories of places so far away about a time seeming to be so long ago.

    I remember hearing about trenches, and how his unit even had gas masks for the horses. My grandfather didn’t try to scare me, but I think he wanted to share a part of the family history not recorded elsewhere. But I didn’t understand the importance of listening to those stories at the time.

    A man in formal attire stands on a wooden dock, wearing a hat and a satchel, with people in the background.
    George Ormond donning his gas mask for a photo opportunity

    My grandfather was a bit of a conundrum. At one moment, he’d be my jovial “Pop Pop,” smiling, arms outstretched, waiting for a hug, and in the next, a grumpy old man seemingly annoyed by my childish noise. He loved my grandmother, who was the yin to his yang. As somber and unhappy as he seemed most the time, she swung to the opposite side of the pendulum. She joked, played games with my brother and I, and let us turn the couches upside down to build indoor forts. Even as kids, we wondered how these two very different people ended up together.

    The two of them raised two sons, the first members in either family to attend and graduate from college. My father served as a U.S. Navy surface warfare officer, and my uncle a navy pilot.

    My dad used to say, “My father was born before the Wright brothers flew the first plane, and in his lifetime, he got to see his own son fly off aircraft carriers.”

    My grandparents celebrated their fiftieth wedding anniversary with both sons and their families, including their six grandchildren. I’m not sure I’d ever seen my grandfather happier. Just three years later, my fun-loving grandmother passed away. Pop Pop deteriorated quickly and was laid to rest by her side seven months later. Sadly, he never got to see two of his grandchildren carry on the military family tradition. My cousin Mark had a career as a navy diver, and I, as a naval intelligence officer. I had the honor of being the first female Ormond to wear the uniform.

    Following my Navy retirement, I finally researched my grandfather’s war history. The 27th Division to which he belonged included a brave band of New Yorkers who fought in fierce battles including the Somme Offensive. President Woodrow Wilson federalized this New York National Guard unit in July 1917, and Major General John F. O’Ryan commanded “O’Ryan’s Roughnecks” throughout the war. His men loved him, and his enlisted men voted on the unit patch, which included stars of the constellation Orion’s Belt, in honor of their leader.

    I remember my grandfather pointing out Orion’s Belt in the night sky, and it became the first constellation I could identify. Pop Pop never shared the connection with his commander and the stars, but it was our one and only astronomy lesson in our 21 years together. That time and those stars now hold an even more special meaning to me.

    Assigned to F Battery, 104th Field Artillery, Private Ormond saw action in the infamous “no man’s land,” Verdun, the St. Mihiel Offensive, and the Meuse-Argonne Offensive. According to O’Ryan, “The Verdun sector had been the scene of very severe fighting and the word ‘La Meuse’ connoted to the French soldier the most desperate fighting, the most terrible suffering, and the most hotly contested area of the war.”

    A certificate honoring George Ormond for his service in World War I, featuring the U.S. eagle seal and text detailing his commendation from the Rockaway Peninsula Citizens' Committee.
    The Rockaway Medal of Honor – one of the few artifacts from George Ormond’s World War I service

    “The Meuse-Argonne Offensive is considered an epic battle which essentially ended World War I,” wrote Pamela A. Bakker, author of  The 104th Field Artillery Regiment of the New York National Guard, 1916 – 1919, From the Mexican Border to the Meuse-Argonne. Bakker stated it was the bloodiest battle in which the U.S. engaged, resulting in 95,786 wounded and 26,277 dead.

    “The citations pertaining to the 104th Field Artillery Regiment, as well as those for the entire 52nd Field Artillery Brigade, almost always have the repeated phrase ‘while under heavy enemy shell fire,’ with many adding ‘under machine gun fire, and gas concentrations,’” Bakker continued.

    Private Ormond’s unit was also attached to the most gassed division among the Americans, which may explain the eyes that teared for the following sixty years. He never mentioned the hunger, the sleeplessness, the lice, the filth, the mud, the cold, or the dysentery common among the men. He also never mentioned the unending fighting, the injuries, or the deaths, which surely he had not forgotten. Instead, he spoke of pride of having served.

    George Ormond instilled in his family a sense of service to country. His two children served, and two of his grandchildren served. My grandfather taught me lessons while he was alive, starting with respect for each life. Learning more about his history, I learned new lessons about his humility regarding his own wartime service. Although I will never see what the mysterious war hero’s injured eyes saw, I learned a great deal from him. I appreciate who he was, what he did, and the courage he displayed both on the battlefield and throughout his life.

    Originally published in “All Gave Some,” Military Writers Society of America 2014 Anthology (Red Engine Press)