Category: Writing

  • Ideas for Naming Characters

    Ideas for Naming Characters

    AutoCrit hosted a webinar yesterday about naming book characters. Here is a summary of methods and ideas to consider recommended by the lively hosts, Daniel and Gareth, and the audience of sixty active writers.

    1. The Origin Story

    • Ask yourself where were your characters born? Where did they come from? When did or do they live?
    • Today, it’s easy to search on the internet for what names were popular at certain times and to see what baby names were popular or still are.
    • Attendees said they used physical phone books, surfed the internet for old yearbooks for names and nicknames of the period, and checked cemeteries and obituaries for ideas.

    2. First Sound or Letter

    • Harsher consonants, for example, K and T, tend to work well with harsher characters.
    • Be careful not to have too many characters with similar sounding names because it may confuse readers.
    • Alliteration works but look up names and meanings for characters to make sure it all makes sense.

    3. Baked-In Allegory

    • Find words that fit like in the Harry Potter series, “Valdemort.” In French, mort means death which builds in a villainous thought.
    • The baked-in allegory can work the other way, too, for example, giving a character a name that makes the audience think he or she is going to be doomed. But then that turns out not to be the case.
    • Think of names reminiscent of other known heroes, heroines, and/or villains.

    4. Clever (Hidden) Rhymes

    • Hannibal Lecter of Hannibal the Cannibal fame (Silence of the Lambs) conjures up an image remembered for years.
    • Sometimes the names can be not-quite-rhymes, but what a last names sound like – be it positive or negative.
    • This method can be a subtle way of linking two concepts because a name sounds like something that the character is not.

    5. Use Tools

    • Check out online name generators and see what sparks you, and then adjust it.
    • Reedsy has one for genre and locations.
    • Daniel recommends Behindthename.com, and after I checked it out, I say the same.

    6. Pay Attention to Rhythm

    • Does the name work as a drumbeat? Read your book out loud and make sure the cadence is right.
    • Consider iambic pentameter with the stress on second syllable since people tend to naturally speak this way in English. There was a reason Shakespeare liked it.
    • Don’t use names people can stumble over and make a story difficult to read. Stephen King discusses this in On Writing too.

    7. Other Thoughts

    • Walk through the telephone book and use a first name from one name and a last name of another.
    • Use names from other cultures to add variety.
    • Look through old movies and movie credits for ideas.
    • Think about the social status of the character and whether he/she should be labeled with wealthy names of the time or names of rulers.
    • If it works, use puns, too, depending on the tone of the story.
    • Remember – it’s about the audience, so make sure it fits.

    Thank you, AutoCrit, for this interesting session, and fellow attendees for your great ideas. Below is the link to the full session. If you have more thoughts to share, please leave a comment!

  • Book Trailers – Yes, or No?

    When I published my first book in 2011, book trailers were all the rage. They were relatively new at the time and came in all shapes and sizes. Then, it seemed they went out of style. I remember hearing, “No one does those anymore.”

    I did my own research and found, as is often the case with “intelligence,” the first report was inaccurate. Book trailers are still alive and well, which didn’t surprise me due to the growth in video popularity across all platforms. Armed with this current marketing news, I set forth to create a trailer for my latest book.

    I share this story with blog readers, many of whom are writers, because I wished I’d read a post like this before I started. I tried a variety of software programs recommended online, but none clicked with my non-tech brain. Then, a writer friend recommended I try Microsoft’s built-in Video Editor program. Why not? So, I headed to my best source for learning things like this, Kevin Stratvert, followed his directions, and created a decent trailer.

    I say “decent” because one of Microsoft Video Editor’s shortcomings is the lack of transitions between video frames. The harsh transitions didn’t work for this project, so I consulted Kevin’s YouTube channel again to watch 5 BEST FREE Video Editors video. I now had small moving images created from my first effort and applied them to the OpenShot video editing program which allowed me to create the needed transitions. Yay!

    I also decided at this point that the free music clip I’d included from the Microsoft Video Editor program wasn’t exactly what I wanted. I purchased a new clip from AudioJungle for a reasonable price, and I was happy with the outcome. I mention this because I’m glad I didn’t settle with what was easier and sort of worked the first time around. Here is the result for the Believing In Horses Out West book trailer. My answer is to the title question is – yes to book trailers.  

  • Untold Stories

    K.C. Alfred / The San Diego Union-Tribune, Jan. 3, 2022

    This month, the USS ABRAHAM LINCOLN deployed with the first female commander in charge of an aircraft carrier in history, Capt. Amy Capt. Bauernschmidt. I had a personal connection to this event from my Navy career dating back to 1995. I recently wrote a related story for the Military Writers Society of America (MWSA) Untold Stories anthology, which starts:

    “The term ‘pioneer’ conjures up images of early settlers venturing out West taking risks for new beginnings. I never saw myself as a pioneer but found myself among a group of pioneers as one of the first women to deploy on a combat aircraft carrier.”

    The story ends with a salute to Capt. Bauernschmidt, and those who follow her, for continuing the adventure and pioneering more new beginnings.

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  • “Adults do like to escape….”

    “Adults do like to escape….”

    Thank you to award-winning and prolific author Janice Spina for having me as a guest on her blog! Janice writes in many genres and supports other authors in their journeys. Interview an Author on Jemsbooks.blog: Valerie Ormond! | JEMSBOOKS